Came into my heart
Filled with memories
That can never part
Things did fell apart
Which made you depart
Prompt 223: Fickle
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*These Silly Words of Mine* has suggested today's prompt, *fickle*.
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15 More Jiggles:
hey Miya, loved this! the monorhyme goes good. runs almost through the poem. goood job!
nice words, elegantly and simply penned! :)
very well written!! wish you could rhyme the 2nd line too... thr would be symmetry!!
Good rhyming there!
a winter tale
lovely poem!!
great going!
very sad Meow,
good memories will remain they are but we can't let them stay forever...:)
falling apart is beyond our control!
nice one dear!!!
Things do go wrong, and they become a test. Poignant in it brevity, this. Thanks.
Hmm, I have lost count how many times this happened to me. At least I finally found the one who stayed. Nice.
So sad and heartfelt...this was wonderful.
very nice rhyming :)
sad things happen ! :|
Heartfelt sad!
Dear Friend,
Good Morning!
first time here.
nice rhyming words.memories are to be cherished.life is full of ups and downs.adjusting with each experience needs mental strength.
wishing you a great day ahead,
sasneham,
Anu
nice tension in this poem.
hmm.. :(
Beautifully written dear :)
Loved it!!
tc
heyy..nice take on prompt..luved the wrds..thnx 4 droppin by at my space..hav read yr wrk..nice hand u hav on poetry..will visit again..:)
Cheers..:)
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