Sunday, November 1, 2009

Shift in Time


You move so swift
That you stealthily drift
You create miracles
I find it magical
You wait for none
But give us all fun
of life
You teach us life's lesson
Our sorrows lessen
Shifting as you move forward
Sifting the right and wrong

18 More Jiggles:

Leo said...

nice n simple.

yes. time does teach all that to us!

good one Miya! :)

spacedlaw said...

Simple yet complex. Well done.

gautami tripathy said...

Simple and succinct..

deathly adventure

Satyu said...

yup..it is beautiful :)

Amity Me said...

Hi Meow,

is this your new site?

i like your rendition of the prompt!

is the Meow at WL the same Meow here?

hope I am right!

have a nice day gurl!!!

SandyCarlson said...

Very lovely!

Sweetest in the Gale said...

Time does all these things. I really enjoyed your take on this prompt...thanks for sharing your words!

Americanising Desi said...

very meooooooow!

Jukota said...

very nice take on what time can do!

Maggie said...

Enjoyable read but a bit difficult to see the small print with my tired old eyes :)

Tumblewords: said...

Oh, it does move so fast! But there is always time for a lesson or two...nice write!

indicaspecies said...

This is lovely, thank you!

Shraddha@theselfloveproject said...

very sweet and nice...

i liked it very much..

PS : De-abbreviate as you like ;) said...

i loooved this blog !!!! cute :)

Andree said...

This is great! The strongest line for me (because of personal experience) is how time lessens sorrow and grief. I enjoyed the lessons/lessens very much.

Tammie Lee said...

so full of appreciation
a wonderful poem.

gabrielle said...

a lesson in gratitude. so true how sorrows fade when we let go. thank you for this gem.

Parv Kaushik said...

lesson frm mahabharata abt concept of time??