Sunday, December 13, 2009

Spider Web

Too many fights
Make our heart tight
It looks flimsy
Making our relationship clumsy
Yet we cling
To each other
Like a Spider Web

for OSI

19 More Jiggles:

Loch Rob said...

We do need companionship and relationships to make live meaningful. You are so right here within the meaning. Nicely done.

Meow said...

@Loch.. that was so fast :) thanks for coming here :) and yea true!!!

Beth P. said...

Sometimes the links seem tenuous, but their strength is great, and can endure, with a little tending!

Thanks for this!

Sweetest in the Gale said...

You said a lot with just a few words...I loved your take on this prompt. Yes, our emotions are fragile, just like those finely spun webs.

shraddha said...

we do cling...don't we...

good one..

Amias said...

Ain't that the truth! But so many of us clinger needs to, especially as we grow old and unwanted.

SandyCarlson said...

So we do. And I wonder why.

Amity Me said...

Miya;

i love this poem of yours, short but sweet and the message is clear!

have a great week ahead...:)

Meow said...

@Beth welcome to my space :) and yeah! true :)
@Sweetest... honored :) :)
@Shraddha...yeah! we DO :)
@Amias... :) :)
@Sandy... Even I wonder why... Lot more to see in my life :)
@Amity... :) :)have a great week too :) :)

Quiet Paths said...

A very different and creative take on this prompt! Relationships sometimes feel clumsy but with love they grow and the way becomes smoother.

Tumblewords: said...

I like the strength written in this piece. Nice work.

Praseela Nair said...

Meaning of relationship in a nutshell...Great!

Meow said...

@Quite Paths..:)
@Tumble... Thank you :)
@Prasee... dhangyu :D

Tammie Lee said...

lovely how a few words can tell a common tale... interesting peak into the psyche of attachment/web

iamyuva said...

since humans are designed to social creatures..

nice one and nice page..

Parv Kaushik said...

truly said and point well made here..

Rajlakshmi said...

very well penned... :) beautiful write... sometimes even these fights make us cling together :)

Amity Me said...

funny, real thoughts!

I like this very much!

as if you've read my mind here!

Eva O'Dell said...

Sometimes the strongest bonds are those that are invisible. They hold us, even if it would be better for them not to.