Thursday, January 21, 2010

Chaos

There I stoodin crossroads
Clock ticking
Time running

Images in disarray
Heart in Pandemonium
Collage of emotions
Creating Chaos within


for OSI

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The Amateur Poet said...

perfecto Miya.. last verse was very eloquent! :)

Tabitha Bird said...

Collage of emaotions...ooh I like that. Lovely words.

Meow said...

@Leo & Tabitha :) thank you both of you :)

SandyCarlson said...

This makes me realize why I sometimes find collages disturbing. I crave the order of a single image.

Meow said...

@Sandy.. absolutely :)

Tumblewords: said...

Surely a collage of chaos - nicely worked!

stardust said...

very cute :)

Parv Kaushik said...

the last two lines almost bowled me over!! very well written!

Meow said...

@Tumble .. thank you :)
@stardust.. thank you :)
@Parv.. really??? thank you :)

Chandrika Shubham said...

Lovely poem! :)I liked the last two lines. :)
Happy blogging! :)

suzannah said...

oh this is amazing <3

Anamika Sureka said...

Great thoughts buddy.will visit often:)

Meow said...

@Chandrika & Suzannah.. thank you so much :D
@Anamika .. thank you.. love to see you here often :D

Amity said...

I missed this one...:)

I like the last paragraph...:)

"collage of emotions, creating chaos within"...:)

Prats said...

well versed :)

Meow said...

@Amity and Prats .. thank you ladies :)