Thursday, January 21, 2010

Summer Rain

Scorching heat waves
Unbearable heated thoughts
Mental agitation starts
Mild breeze knocks
Eyeing my gloom
Releases little drops

Regally washing pains
Away from heart
Indurating determination to
Never give up

15 More Jiggles:

Amity said...

Oh wow...written on a different note, but mind you i failed in here!

Keep up Miya!

Meow said...

@Amity.. Nobody fails :) Keep going.. thank you :)

The Amateur Poet said...

yep. no one fails.. failure is just stepping stones for success. keep at it! :)

nice strong positive message..! :)

vidya said...

How a summer rain can soothe us! Good one, Sowmiya

Meow said...

@Vidya...thanks for dropping by my space and thank you :)

Saras said...

Very good post. Nicely done.

Missy said...

Nicely said and penned

The Write Girl said...

Beautifully done...I love the flow in each verse.

Meow said...

@Saras.. thank you :)
@Missy.. thank you :)
@The Write.. :) :)

Amias said...

A wonderfully different take on the prompt!

Meow said...

@Amias.. thank you :)

stardust said...

Yes one must never give up in any condition they are put in...
Great message !!

Parv Kaushik said...

full of imagery.. its like an image not just poetry!

Meow said...

@Star.. absoulutely.. and thank you :)
@Parv.. thanks a ton :)

Praseela Nair said...

Good one!