Dilapidated space
Losing its identity
In the crowded place
Marching towards darkness
Where a small hole is made
by some passerby
To bring inside the space
the GOLDEN RAY
Of hope, confidence, trust
The world comes to know
of the ruined space
Conspiring to bring light in darkness
There comes the floodlight
Painting the walls with
Golden moments and
Lovely Memories
P.S. This piece of work is dedicated to two people. For Ganesh, who is light of my life. For Leo, who is light of this blog. This being my 50th post here, I am happy to celebrate the GOLDEN JUBILEE with OSI Prompt for the week GOLD :)
for OSI
Prompt 223: Fickle
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*These Silly Words of Mine* has suggested today's prompt, *fickle*.
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18 More Jiggles:
happy 50th post Miya! :)
this was just WOW!! :D
lovely wordplay for GOLD.. and one of ur biggest jiggles! :)
love it!
Beautiful words.
Hi Miya;
Ganesh who?
Of course, Leo is a common friend dear, need not ask about him!
Lovely golden post dear!
Happy Valentines, hugs!!!
Happy 5oth post, too!
This was beautiful...such depth of meaning in your words! Absolutely lovely.
May you have more celebrations like this!
words broken into tiny pieces
@Sweetest... thank you so much :)
@Gautami... thank you dear :)
Your poem is very beautiful.
lovely poem..
template is awsome too.
sometimes all it takes is a single ray of golden light. Happy 50th!
Happy Fiftieth post! Golden Moment is an inspiring poem. Very nice.
There's a pleasant warmth in this poem.
I have longed for that small hole in the darkness, allowing the golden rays to come in. And with this light, comes hope.
@sandy.. :) :)
@Shraddha.. thank you :)
@Tammie.. :D
@SOL.. glad that you found warmth :)
@Loch.. yes :) I meant hope by the word light
Beautiful :)
Congos Sowmi :)
Let the beautiful golden rays of hope peep thro the hole to bringten your days. Congrats on 50!!
I was reading you other post and forgot these wonderful writings.
beautiful template
and augmenting words
maybe youll like what we have to say
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I just noticed that alot of what you write is in stanzas, ive adopted a simular style or writing,
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really heart touching...
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