Just a beep
before I sleep,
A soft voice
murmurs loving words
slowing down
my thumping heart
spreading warmth and
Peace to cluttered mind
P.S. for you my love
FOR OSI
Prompt 210: Underground
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that beep just resonates through the heart doesn't it?! :D
feels so wonderful!
O...so beautiful...his murmurs
lull you to sleep.
A magic moment.
Enjoyed this considerably, very tender – thank you for sharing…
…rob
Image & Verse
Wow!!!
Soooooooooooo lovely :-)
(@^.^@)
Very soothing and warm...
Stopped in 'cause I love cats! Your blog name caught my eye, over at OSI.
www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com
like a lullaby, one that is soothing and reassuring
very sweet
To quiet down and just listen to the murmur. Very peaceful.
I often wait, unsuccessfully, for that 'beep'.
I ache to hear that beep. Well done.
Oh I love that beep...but I have waited in vain for it to come...:)
Would somebody give me a beep so that I can sleep as peaceful as Miya...
Lucky Miya's love, she's written a very beautiful poem for him!
Tender and comforting words...wonderful!
Oh, for that sound. Beautiful. Good for you that you have a beloved.
wonderful...that one beep can make you sleep and dream so much more sweeter...many a times we keep hoping and hoping for that beep, and when it comes, it's the best thing!
resonating murmuring beats - what could be better? Nice poem!
such a lovely lull. sweet dreams...
Hey congrats on the MBA. Could not post it on the other blog for some reasons.
All the very best and like everyone said, nice poem :)
@Banjo.. thank you so much :) for your wishes and comment on this poem :) :)
Love,
Sowmiya
Very simple way to express how much you care... I loved it!!!
Keep Blogging
regards
DuDo
www.dudoism.blogspot.com
Great writing! Come check my blog out :)
http://youdidwhaaat.blogspot.com/
:)
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