Sunday, March 14, 2010

His Murmurs

Just a beep
before I sleep,
A soft voice
murmurs loving words
slowing down
my thumping heart
spreading warmth and
Peace to cluttered mind

P.S. for you my love

FOR OSI

21 More Jiggles:

Leo said...

that beep just resonates through the heart doesn't it?! :D

feels so wonderful!

mia said...

O...so beautiful...his murmurs
lull you to sleep.

anthonynorth said...

A magic moment.

Rob said...

Enjoyed this considerably, very tender – thank you for sharing…
…rob
Image & Verse

Anya said...

Wow!!!
Soooooooooooo lovely :-)

(@^.^@)

Geraldine said...

Very soothing and warm...

Stopped in 'cause I love cats! Your blog name caught my eye, over at OSI.

www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com

lissa said...

like a lullaby, one that is soothing and reassuring

SOL said...

very sweet

Loch Rob said...

To quiet down and just listen to the murmur. Very peaceful.

Stan Ski said...

I often wait, unsuccessfully, for that 'beep'.

Mojo said...

I ache to hear that beep. Well done.

Amity said...

Oh I love that beep...but I have waited in vain for it to come...:)

Would somebody give me a beep so that I can sleep as peaceful as Miya...

Lucky Miya's love, she's written a very beautiful poem for him!

Sweetest in the Gale said...

Tender and comforting words...wonderful!

SandyCarlson said...

Oh, for that sound. Beautiful. Good for you that you have a beloved.

Aayushi Mehta said...

wonderful...that one beep can make you sleep and dream so much more sweeter...many a times we keep hoping and hoping for that beep, and when it comes, it's the best thing!

Tumblewords: said...

resonating murmuring beats - what could be better? Nice poem!

gabrielle said...

such a lovely lull. sweet dreams...

Madhurjya (Banjo) said...

Hey congrats on the MBA. Could not post it on the other blog for some reasons.

All the very best and like everyone said, nice poem :)

Meow said...

@Banjo.. thank you so much :) for your wishes and comment on this poem :) :)

Love,
Sowmiya

DuDo said...

Very simple way to express how much you care... I loved it!!!

Keep Blogging

regards
DuDo
www.dudoism.blogspot.com

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